Aww life is worth living, you just ahve to give it time,
it was a very weel written poem,
im here to talk if youd like xox

She will... shes out there somewhere looking for you too. until then be strong for her cause shes gonna need you too

That was very good! I loved it! It flowed very nicely. There was a lot of emotion, and it held my attention through the whole thing. Great job! 5/5

Good things come to those who wait. its a great poem well writen you had me hanging on every word.

Here I satnd,
I feel all alone,
even though I'm surrounded
by so many that care

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You described perfectly how I feel every day. None of my friends ever understood, how I could feel so alone, but know that I'm not, and know that they're there. It drives them crazy that they don't get it, and it makes me angry that they don't understand... Anywho thank you soooo much for that. It was also a really good poem , and I love reading your stuff, 5/5!!!!!

with heart from a Ravyn

Love your poem, know exactly what you mean with it.. I think it is really good..! check out some of my poems and let me know what you think. x

There is alot of energy and emeotion in this well writen poem keep up the good work! you never know where your dreams will take you!

Hey ill be the girl that you are waiting for

I cut too and life isnt worth living for me but i can be that if u let me

Wow...u write deep i feel like this in a way..anyway...im sorry u feel this way...its sad but ur writing is great...5/5

~*!SaRaH!*~

Well since were all huggin eachother in the forum i thot id give u a comment hug. :D wow this is amazing. nice use of wording. plus it really painted a picture. gr8 work.

Will anyone catch me,
stop me from falling,
[I really liked those lines!]

This was a sad poem, and sadly I can relate. I didn't really see anything in this one that needs changing, thought it was great the way it is! =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

P.S. Sorry I've taken so long to return the favor.. my mouse died =(

Such a sad poem. I can really relate to the feeling of being alone and feeling as though nobody can seem to drag me out of the darkness.

I love it. Very nicely done =]

This was a sad poem...beautiful but very sad.
I hope that you have found her by now!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid