I could go there for many of my sins and be able to breathe without the scrutiny of the stupid hypocritical world. I wish it existed Ally, more then you could ever know, i wish it existed...

Anywho, another winner 5/5 love. It was a great poem, wonderfully deep, and it gives me hope that one day i will be free, from these unimaginable nightmares.

It wouldn't let me vote... cuz I've already voted... but just so you know I give it a 5/5. I love this poem, and it's my favorite of yours. I relate a bunch and stuff, and I really liked it. excellent work sweety!

Ravyn

Well I wasn't much a fan of the part in quotations but the repetition worked out beter than I thought it would and how you had all kinds of out of placed people listed or at least the groups society puts them in.

Wow.. i really like this. It's definitely very unique and I really like that about it. The line "Burn in hell, demon child" really stuck with me and kind of gave me chills. I loved this poem. It has a sense of compassion because of your acceptance of so many different types of people. Great job on this. 5/5*

Indeed this was different...I usually never read this types of poetry...but this was good...nice work

@...wow...i dont know what to say..that was a great poem...it words worked themselves into me like magic...briliant:)..see i told u on that thread that i would like reading your poems..and guess what..i actually do...and so now i;m off to read another two:):)...@

I would love to live in your little world, sounds like the perfect place.

Your poem is really good, the idea is pretty cool. In some way I think we all have our own little world in which we can be happy and stop the pain. You described yours pretty well.

Good job! 5/5

XoXo
Gaby

This is a very good piece, well written and expressed. I love the concept behind it, wish such a world really did exist… you wrote this very well, it has a smooth flow and good structure, the descriptions are fair and are portrayed well.
Overall a fantastic piece, with well expressed fairly original content

5/5

Heartfelt words. Wisdom beyond your years. Great write.

The poem flowed nicely and and the essence of your struggle was clearly present. This poem is an inspirational piece to all those who have endured this same hardship!! 5/5

I loved this poem! i was really dark and sad though:( I'm sorry if this is true. I loved the last stanza, great work on this.

--Steph

This is my ABSOLUTE favorite of yours. I love this poem so much it's not even funny. Great jib, lovely, and keep it up! 5/5

Ravyn

Funny how we all fit into that little world of yours. I think this is just ONE of my fave. poems by you. This was so deep and powerful.

[[ Poetess ]]

Beautiful, clever poem which shows a lot of talent. There is a big difference between the standard of this one and the other 2 I read. It shows great improvement in your skills.

Mmm... I love this one. My personal favorite of yours by far... I adore it.

(The suspence is killing me)
Ayanda