Another absolutly beautiful poem!!! The words flow is simply great, I don't know how you do it everytime. Evry poem of yours is the same only in the fact that thy're beautifully writen, but they all have their own stories and twists. Just like individual lives on paper. Excellent work as always.

~Ravyn

Very nice images to accompany that. um, what was it about?

..Wow? :|

Nice poem, 5/5

Wow.. amazing!! I loved you use of words! The descriptions were so vivid! The rhyming was very good. It flowed very well. I loved this poem! Great job! 5/5

Cayce Lee

Yeah i agree absolutley amazing. Love the words again, i got some pretty good imagery reading that poem

Wow. Your awesome. Im jealous. you have alot of talent. I appriciate that you considered me one of your favorites.. but i believe it should be the other way around. My poems don't compare to yours. You definitly have a spot on my favorites list! I hope to read more. 5/5

Amberinaa*

Awesome poem man, you really have the heart and emotion for it

Another amasingly written poem! I loved it. You've certainly got talent for writting dark, fantasy poem. Great work on this!

--Steph

Wow, i loved the way you worded the poem it had a nice affect!! Like TaperedDreams said you do have talent for writting Dark/Fantasy poems!!! This was a very nice poem!!! 5/5!! Never quit writting!!!

I loved the ending line. It really summer up this image quite well. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

I like the ending the most. Wording is great and you wrote this poem excellent.
5/5 Keep up.