Been reading your poems, and i really like your style of writing and particulary this poem i love! seems like you say it how it is, no holding back and that makes great reading, look forward to reading more

This kinda hurts me even tho i dont know u it still touches me inside cause i know how you feel ive been there i am there right now if u ever need a friend or even someone to let it all out to just remember i am here

That was a really good poem, very sad im not sure what to say, keep on writing

andrea

Specheless i dont even know what to say but keep writing

I love this poem its like amazing really..i love all your poems..you are a great writter and you should not hold that much pain inside you..always Rachy

What a truly sad and emotional piece you have penned it's ritely worden and meaning ful . Your talented ur work amazes me. this words one can get lost in. The picture you paint for the minds eye is painlessly emphathetic. Taking the reader to another place. dammm dis poem is all dat.

Wow. that was amazing. 5/5

Really deep. really good. 5/5

amandaxx.

Wow! i bow to you! the way yo write it's so amazing

It was something i cant explain.

u r such a good writter...

i m struck by ur words. each line was full of emotions.

great work

I loed this piece. it was heartfelt and deep. also i could feel your pain in every line, but at the same time this poem was very beautiful.

Theres fear behind my eyes
I feel more pain
Than I should know of

i liked those lines alot. i must say i feel exactly the same. and i've felt that way more than once.

I write to help my own tears fade away

That line caught my eye from the start. it was touching, also something i can relate to. after i read this wonderful piece, i couldn't believe how much i could relate to it. like you just described how i felt and feel. it's nice to know there's people out there that feel the same. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.