Alone (Prose)
by Sean Dohr Jun 24, 2006
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The tears that fall upon this page will no sooner dry than the ink with which I have penned my soul. The ink with which I have written words that only vaguely describe the pain inside. The emptiness I feel as the young men and women around me are tucked into bed. I wait eternally for the warmth brought on by a mother's touch or the gentle hand of a father gliding across my back. I wait for the words I long to hear. I love you... |
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17 years ago
Aww...this has so much emotion in it...i truly loved it...5/5...congrats on getting 3rd place in my contest...keep up the good work.
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17 years ago
by IfIhide11
I liked it a lot. Very poetic. Keep writing.
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17 years ago
by LadyPearl
Short, but a very tranquil and sad poem.
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17 years ago
Awwww how sad! i really liked this though! it had so much emotion that i could sence. it was amazing. i loved everything about this. 58475345/5
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17 years ago
by HOLLY ARMER
Wow, this is absolutely heartbreaking. Sadly, there are countless people who can relate to this.
I can offer no critique at all, but I will say that your opening line in this is brilliant!
Take care and keep it up~Holly
