Walk not run

by brkendown   Jun 24, 2006


I wanna walk not run
because everything is going by so fast
i wanna walk and not stumble because i cant get up anymore
i wanna walk and not talk
because its amazing whay you miss
i wanna wald and not hide
because you are looking for me
i wanna walk right past you
because you cant stop me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Okay, Hey I'm the head of Fish bowl and I was happy to get your application. You have great poteintal, and I'm looking forward to watching you blossem, but I have a few pointers for you if you want them:

    a) Slag is not really good form for writing poetry
    b) stanzas are your bestfriend lol

    Passion is writing with out it they are just meaningless words. I wish you thebest

    now for some club info

    1) I need you to read the club rule in maditory read for Jenn
    2) I need you to be active in discussions if not I will most likly kick you from the club.. sounds harsh but I rather have active members and a small club then a huge one with inactive people.
    3) and most of call take suggestions with a smile we're only trying to help you, and if you have a problem just give me or ano=yother member a shout okay?

    Best of Luck
    Jenn

    Ps: Poem wise this is cute =]