That was so lovely, it made me smile and remember the ones i love, it was really beautiful, and well written, keep it up my friend

Though the imagery is beautiful, and it is because it gives off this real calm feeling, there are somet ings that are just typical of love poems:
We dance on clouds and under the moonlight,
[Though this line is romantic and a bit different, most people will either write love as being on the clouds or beneath moonlight.]
Your silky lips pull me closer to you,
[Not saying this is cliche but something I was told was to try and avoid words that end in y. Maybe you could make that silk or something else.]
You stole my heart with your one sweet kiss,
[Most pople will say that a kiss is sweet but I think maybe go beyond that.]
Think about romantic things that actually happen as well even if they aren't intended to be or happen by accident. But I like your writing style.

Truly excellent poem, You completely brought this peice of work to life. It literaly jumped out at me and pulled me in :p great job 5/5

~*`Bryce Dressler`*~

Great rhythm an rhyme in this romantic poem

Aww this was so sweet and romantic! It was beautiful and I thought no changes needed to be made. The way you worded each line was your own technique, and that is what makes the poem so unique and wonderful. Don't change any bit of it! Thank you for your comment on my poem, it is very much appreciated! Keep up your good work! 5/5

Aww, that waaas really sweet. I loved the way you put together all of the descriptions, and such to make the poem all it could be, it was a great poem, but all of yours are. lol. 5/5 as always hun. Keep it up!

Ravyn

Yay I can so relate to this piece!
you did a very good job hun, I can sense your words!

"My skin against yours, I feel your heart beat,
It's pumping through your veins but so discreet."
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I love these two lines, amazing piece of work ;)

Keep it up and thanks so much for your comment I'll think about your suggestion. But thanks anyway =)
Lots Of Love
NemO x0x0x0x0x

This was really good...Nice work

Well Done Taleee!!! I like that you kept the readers interest in the poem! Some people start off strong then have a bad ending but you kept my attention throughout the whole poem! Beautifull written and best of luck with the fellas lol
-Krissey

Aww.. that is very sweet. I loved it. Definitely shows strong feelings of love. There was only one little thing.. on the first line of the last stanza, you have:
As the sunshine rises and the clouds flea,
I'm pretty sure you mean flee. But I loved this poem. Great job on this. 5/5*

Nice poem

Though i liked the complete poem but the ending is just so perfect

As the sunshine rises and the clouds flee,
There's only love left that you have for me.
And when night falls, With the stars in the sky,
It's then I know our love will never die.

very beautifully written

all the best and take care
5/5

Nice I thought it was pretty good, great flow different form your others

Hey darl this was really g0od definitely m0st pe0ple in luv can relate t0 =) this was beautifully w0rded. great j0b. l0ved it!!! =) thank u for ur kind words on my poem i really appreciate it heapz!! =) cya xx

Another well written! I guess your known as a poet now because you've got lots of comment on almost every single poem you wrote! Mine may not be as significant but its my pleasure to read such wonderful poems of yours!

Truly great. One of the best love poems I've read. Keep up the great writing. 5/5

Great job! I LIKED IT`!