Wow i really like this poem. i can sorta kinda relate.. but i really like it. it has great flow and rhythm.. im not sure wut u should call this.. i duno all i kno is htis is a great poem. keep writing..
take care
angie

Aww, i know in a way how you feel, i was that way with my ex..but anyways, i loved it!!! It's a great poem babe!!! 5/5

Wow...this was really good...i loved it...

let's see...for titles maybe
Standing in the shadows
hoping you will stay
without you, i am nothing
you are my everything
only you can set me free
you just like me cuz im hot
deaf to my cry

i don't know...anyways...good poem...5/5.

I would name this poem "Deaf and Silent" but hat's just me. I really enjoyed reading this poem... I like it bunches and bunches, ansd I give it a 5/ excellent work.

ravyn!

I really liked this poem! I can sorta relate. Well actually I can relate a lot. Anyways, the flow and rhyming were good. It held a lot of emotion. For titles, hmm I can't really think of any sorry. Good poem though. Great job!

Very awesome! kinda left me wanting to know more tho... but thats good, makes you think. well done. as for a title, im not sure id know what to call it either...

Brilliant...I think the tittle should be "Walked Away"...Keep up the good work

I really liked this poem especially because I could relate to it..along time ago i wrote a poem sorta like this..I hate when guys never see personality and I too wonder well if I wasn't pretty would you still like me? Wonderully written I liked how you released your feelings!!
Chelsey_lynn

Could you please read "Reunited to Late?"