Comments : My Own Prison

  • 17 years ago

    by brkendown

    I like it it has alot of power behind the words keep up the work!
    ps thanks for the coments!

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I can really relate to this poem.. every line of it was like me talking. I always enjoy poems I can relate to. This had a lot of emotion in it, and the flow was pretty good. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Therapy actually works. If you have someone you really cares about their job. Trust me when I say this, but there are a lot of people out there that love helping people. They may seem like they are in it for the money, but they can really help, they wouldn't go through that many years of schooling to have it go to waste. Really good poem, keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    Love the rythem and flow and how it shows what is happening and it never reveals the actuall thing it is about but at the same time it does (does that make any sense?)

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    5/5
    very structured poem
    Your different ideas are very astounding.
    Keeps me amused while I read.
    thanks again,
    ~Emah