Done Very well, i gave it 5/5 your an excellent poet maybe you can read a couple of mine tell me wat you think neways nice job keep writing

Mike

Wow very good love it and u r not alone I am dealing with someone I love right now who feels just like u keep up the great work it does help to let it out and I am here if u need to talk 5/5

love Tammi

Anna hun!
that was heartbreaking and so sad!!
I love the poem overall, no matter how sad it is, you wrote it perfectly and made the reader feel your words..and thats what I like in your poems =)

I really hope you'll Okay and doing fine, in everything.
how are your exams going? I hope you're doing a great job even thou I know you will do =)
btw I miss you to death hun

Now Take care of yourself
Good Luck
Oh Don't forget keeping your excellent work up ;)
Luv U
NemO x0x0x0x0x

Very good poem girl, good work once again. Do remember, that even if I am litterally half way around the world from you, you can still always reach for my hand.
I'm always here

Tim

Anna its kate, i love you dearly if you ever wanna talk giv me a call, i'm here for u
my line never stoped!!!!!!
take care of ur self
love ur angel

Simply Beautiful. You write with such power yet with the ability to lay open the pain and thoughts that come from deep inside.

Aw hun this is so beautiful and unique and just.. wow. self explanitory honestly. i loved it, there was a lot of emotion and passion and feeling. well done, take care,xxoo

Killer ending. Really. I espaecially like the line- 'Filled with contradiction'
Really intense.

xxx

Great job. Keep writing. 5/5
-Vino

This is excellent! keep up the good work=) 5/5

This is excellent! keep up the good work=) 5/5

Very emotional and full of passion... I really liked the poem... It's very strong emotional poem.

You have such passion and strength! Your writing only shows how strong and powerful you really are! How beautiful! How magnificent! You writing captures the pain of life...

Rich

This poem does speak from the heart,and i am in the same position.please read some of my poems,if u get the chance.this is exactly how i feel,reading that is like reading my scrap book of thoughts.its great..take care hun x x

I found a poem of yours that i hadn't commented on, and wow, I missed out before. I love you sweetheart. I don't know if you will get this message, because it seems you haven't been on in a while, but if you do just know that. I know we don't live in visiting distance from eachother, and I am sorry I can't be there for you in the flesh. baby, are you okay? Just, drop me a line some time. Did you visit ryl? Are things getting any better? I really hope so. As always, a heart renching poem. Huggles sweetheart.

-Tainted

Hey beautiful I know I already commented on this one, but I wanted you to know that I stole your title for this poem for one of mine, lol, but I give you credit. I was looking for inspiration for a poem for my Creative writing class. Also, thank you very much for your sweet, comment. You are indeed an angel. *hugs*

-Ellie

Hi...It's me, formerly from long, long ago, 'Sungrl'....remember??

Truth is I'm really a great-gramma and hardly ever come on here anymore...just passin' through and doing a rare posting...
I got to wondering about you recently...
I, of course,prefer to think (read hope) this piece is more fiction than truth, but mainly....
hope you're OK...
These are tough times all around really, so being even "OK" is a real ongoing work of commitment to ideals, mental self-control, and higher spiritual ground...
I certainly know personally..and being around children helps me very much to stay focussed...
Warm Good Will and Very Best of Wishes To You, Anna..........'-)