Comments : Truth Or Fiction?

  • 13 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    Done Very well, i gave it 5/5 your an excellent poet maybe you can read a couple of mine tell me wat you think neways nice job keep writing

    Mike

  • 13 years ago

    by Tammi

    Wow very good love it and u r not alone I am dealing with someone I love right now who feels just like u keep up the great work it does help to let it out and I am here if u need to talk 5/5

    love Tammi

  • 13 years ago

    by Nee

    Anna hun!
    that was heartbreaking and so sad!!
    I love the poem overall, no matter how sad it is, you wrote it perfectly and made the reader feel your words..and thats what I like in your poems =)

    I really hope you'll Okay and doing fine, in everything.
    how are your exams going? I hope you're doing a great job even thou I know you will do =)
    btw I miss you to death hun

    Now Take care of yourself
    Good Luck
    Oh Don't forget keeping your excellent work up ;)
    Luv U
    NemO x0x0x0x0x

  • 13 years ago

    by Timothy B

    Very good poem girl, good work once again. Do remember, that even if I am litterally half way around the world from you, you can still always reach for my hand.
    I'm always here

    Tim

  • 13 years ago

    by Failed Attempt

    Anna its kate, i love you dearly if you ever wanna talk giv me a call, i'm here for u
    my line never stoped!!!!!!
    take care of ur self
    love ur angel

  • 13 years ago

    by Rich

    Simply Beautiful. You write with such power yet with the ability to lay open the pain and thoughts that come from deep inside.

  • 13 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw hun this is so beautiful and unique and just.. wow. self explanitory honestly. i loved it, there was a lot of emotion and passion and feeling. well done, take care,xxoo

  • 13 years ago

    by Avellana

    Killer ending. Really. I espaecially like the line- 'Filled with contradiction'
    Really intense.

    xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Great job. Keep writing. 5/5
    -Vino

  • 13 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is excellent! keep up the good work=) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is excellent! keep up the good work=) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very emotional and full of passion... I really liked the poem... It's very strong emotional poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Rich

    You have such passion and strength! Your writing only shows how strong and powerful you really are! How beautiful! How magnificent! You writing captures the pain of life...

    Rich

  • 12 years ago

    by michelle

    This poem does speak from the heart,and i am in the same position.please read some of my poems,if u get the chance.this is exactly how i feel,reading that is like reading my scrap book of thoughts.its great..take care hun x x

  • 12 years ago

    by Trampled Angel

    I found a poem of yours that i hadn't commented on, and wow, I missed out before. I love you sweetheart. I don't know if you will get this message, because it seems you haven't been on in a while, but if you do just know that. I know we don't live in visiting distance from eachother, and I am sorry I can't be there for you in the flesh. baby, are you okay? Just, drop me a line some time. Did you visit ryl? Are things getting any better? I really hope so. As always, a heart renching poem. Huggles sweetheart.

    -Tainted

  • 11 years ago

    by Trampled Angel

    Hey beautiful I know I already commented on this one, but I wanted you to know that I stole your title for this poem for one of mine, lol, but I give you credit. I was looking for inspiration for a poem for my Creative writing class. Also, thank you very much for your sweet, comment. You are indeed an angel. *hugs*

    -Ellie

  • 10 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Hi...It's me, formerly from long, long ago, 'Sungrl'....remember??

    Truth is I'm really a great-gramma and hardly ever come on here anymore...just passin' through and doing a rare posting...
    I got to wondering about you recently...
    I, of course,prefer to think (read hope) this piece is more fiction than truth, but mainly....
    hope you're OK...
    These are tough times all around really, so being even "OK" is a real ongoing work of commitment to ideals, mental self-control, and higher spiritual ground...
    I certainly know personally..and being around children helps me very much to stay focussed...
    Warm Good Will and Very Best of Wishes To You, Anna..........'-)