Wow, again, great poem, that would be scary to have a vision like that. omg! again very deep, great! (once again) 5/5

Omgg that was even scarier!!! You are a great great great writer..All of your stuff it just leaves you in suspense...i love it! 5/5

I love this poem! It holds so much suspense and then when you get to the end and you know what the poem is all about your just like ''wow''. Amazing work! I really enjoyed reasing it---5/5

4EvEr --
"He was at the peek of his game
But it was her that stood in his way
She knew
He killed her own momma"

Your first stanza. It really confused me. First of all, 'peak' is spelled like that, not like 'peek'. Second, I can`t tell how many people you are referring to. It keeps saying he and her, but it seems like there is only one subject. You may want to consider revising that stanza so it makes more sense to the reader. Other than that, the flow was good. Great job. 5/5

Samantha Hollywood

O yea..u should get it out i hav visions out 2.....it scared me alot......but did it come true.....im scared for mine to come true....read Why.. for my vision...
this is really sad.......i lik it alot though...

This is very nice! it was more like a story than a poem! but you wrote in the end

"I had a vison this little girl around 12 was going to be killed and it was so true.. I just had to get it out"

i would freak out if i had visions like this!

keep it up!