This is really a very unique poem, i just hvnt read anything like this before, the words and the pattern is just so diff. Very captivating, really liked it.

All the best and take care
5/5

Very wicked in a form not alot of people know. Very Bold. Loved it like I love all you pieces. 5/5

Amazing very unique I loved every word

Your use of language amazes me. You use such delicate vocabulary, especially with your adjectives. Its a great piece and you're a very talented poet with a gift for using words. Great piece!

"the passing perfect petal lips
of an aimless gaze." I love that line, it reminded me of beautiful people who settle for any job they think would be easiest...

I love the title because its so true for all love relationships. Love is painful, period. It is never smooth sailing, and bittersweet is the perfect juxtaposition for describing it.
Lemme know when you publish a poetry book, I'll buy the first copy ;-)

Thanks hun im glad im with rob to =D

Excellent! And again, excellent!
Though, and this might just be me, at some parts I felt no flow.
But still, I demand more poetry from you!

This is amazing. not surprised it's a strong 5! well done x

This poem is adorably delicate, and also very meaningful. I loved the " velvet pose"
That made me happy. Good imagery was used here. Keep it up!

Beautiful imagery,
amazing and deff 5/5
you have a beautiful strong voice! keep it up!!!