WOW! nice words flowing in it, beautiful poem. I would HAVE to say definately a 5/5!

I loved the beginning of your poem,

In the darkness he lurks
Creeping along thin lines
Of fear and death

I liked the way your poem is detailed and tells a story.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

That scared me...I am speechless, it was greattttttt That's all i can really say about it 5/5

WOW i dont even think that i can say in words how amazing that was you are so talented. Keep them coming

A xx

Wow...that's all i can say..

O wow-I am speechless. Everything about that poem is perfect...except on the last line you spelled murder wrong--It is so deep and powerful. It gave me the chills----Amazing write! 5/5

4EvEr --
Great job! I don`t think I`ve ever read a poem quite like this ;; it was definitely unique, and the format was different than most poems. The rhymes were unexpected and complex ;; it added a really nice twist to your poem. The flow throughout the poem was perfect. Better than most poems I`ve recently read. Great job.
5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

It's a good poem, I didn't like it for the content but it's good!

Wow this is really good again...ur a awsome poet...this is really sad.....
a 5/5 for me!!! again!!