Dumbed

by brkendown   Jun 27, 2006


Seeing the light
looking oh so bright
wish you where here
wanting to be there
waiting for friends
while your the only one who attends
the party is going on
while we wait with no light
the darkness is filling the room
and i think we are dumbed

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  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    Well, I'M not comfused. I think you may have meant "doomed", but Idk. Other than that, I pretty much get it. It's one of those specific instances or feelings you write about, and it may not make much sense to other people. I write poems like that ALL THE TIME!! lol! I, for one, enjoyed it. 4/5 (since it doesn't make sense to others!!)!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    I really did not understand that.. lol maybe it's just me, b/c i dont udnerstand a lot! but really i didnt...but it was still good tho!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    I was a little confused but pretty good anyway

  • 17 years ago

    by kelS;

    Ah i donno i don`t really like this one. its kind of confusing, and hard to tell whats going on, try describeing the situation more?

  • 17 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Sorry, but this poem really confused me.
    with you where here
    wanting to be there
    I didn't really get that part.

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