Amazing job! I'm over here singing it over...wOw! Very nice song! Luv it & def. 5/5!
-Amanda

This would truely make a great song! I absolutely love the chorus (and the revised chorus)---Im not that great at judging songs, but I thought that this was good. Definately 5/5

Hey,

This was a really good song, there were a few slang words, but other than that it was good. I could really imagine putting this to music. You should try that sometime and let me know how it turned out:)

Very nice lyrics Samantha!

While I was reading it. I was actually singing it to myself. Sounded pretty good! It came across to me as a RnB kinda song. Since there was alot of slang in there. But all in all, I thought you did a great job with this. I'm not sure if you've written any lyrics before this one. But if you havn't, you've done great on your first go. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

A perfect poem, you have some great talent that i don't have enough words to describe your poems, they all so great.5/5

WOW!!! i loved it hunni, it was great, awesome perfectttttt... =) i can relate ALOT to this, So that is why i love it even more!! hehe definitely 5/5

I absolutly loved it.
It was soo relateable.
It's better then a lot of songs that are actually on the radio now.
5/5

Great job, nice lyrics. You can add more imagery

Like it as a poem, dun think I'd like it so much as a song.. Good job. 5/5

ravyn

WOW! I wanted to start singing while I was reading it. These are great lyrics! I wish I could write lyrics like that lol. Anyways, Great job!!

Love the choras, very catchy

why 45 minutes? does that fit with the tune you have, because it seems a bit wierd to me...

apart from that, i loved it. it was really well written and very clever

Ruby

Not bad! i am a singer/songwritter, so i really like it when someone else finally writes lyrics!
keep it up!

Really good!! i look forward to seeing it on one of the great hit lists!!! lol no really great job! it was sad, but i liked it... keep it up!

WOW.. i must say this is one of the best songs I've read on here. It all seemed so perfect. And I could relate to it. My favorite lines were:
Cuz things are gone when lives move on but you just gotta ;; stay strong
And also the revised chorus, I loved that too! You did a great job on this. It was very beautifully written and would make a great song! 5/5 Keep it up & Take Care!! :)

Umm interesting piece...well lyrics...once again not so good at commenting lyrics or songs since I don't write them myself but yeah. I liked it.
~~Retniapdoolb

Awesome song;

Cuz things are gone when lives move on but you just gotta ;; stay strong.

I loved hat line, it was so great! Very well written, I love the style of this.

Peace. [Sole]

These are a bit repetitive, btu i spuppose thats wot lyrics do so i wont fault u on that. however it does seem that there is a story behind this that isnt really explained, for example the relationship between the people. only a minor fault tho, it would work well as a song

-biscuit-