Black Roses

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A cool heart break poem. I really loved the line

"I will break his neck"

It shows-in a way-that even though someone's playing along they will get even when they can. Loved the dark atmosphere and all. Really cool write for it's dark/sad content.
~Faith

Amazing poem! It was written really well and it keeps the readers attention the whole way through--- My favorite stanza is the last one:

"He broke my heart
I will break his neck
As I tell him thanks for the roses"

It shows how angry you are after the rest of the poem is more based on sadness and not trusting anymore--

Great write! 5/5

That was infinitely cruel of him!
Ah well, no one respects love anymore. I noticed that your poems basically on't rhyme, but they sound great anyway. Dark, blunt, and emotional. Very good!

//T.L.//

I loved the idea of black roses. It signals death, or dying. Which already gave it a haunting dark image. Then making it a present for someone else, wow. Hmm, a heart break and then she snaps. This is a really good poem , a really cool story with really good images. Well, haunting images! Ouch!.. getting cheated on with the best friend, I can see the reason for this poem. So sorry. Great write though, I hope it didn't really happen!..