Any part of you

by Kasey   Jun 30, 2006


I wish that you
would have let me knew
after those years
with nothing but my tears
and you watched me cry
for most of my life
and you never trid to help me out
you just watched me with all of your doughts
but now i am strong
and workin on my own
i dont need your
strength anymore
cause now i am fine
and living in this life
that doesnt not include
any part of you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    I liked this. the ending inparticular. i think its it seems pretty personal and can sence the emotion in it. not to complain, i cant spell on my best days lol, but theres a few spelling mistakes, like , doughts, doubts?
    and on this line,

    would have let me knew,

    would sound better
    would have let me know ?

    its good though and i enjoyed reading it, so keep it up!

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