Taken Away

by Stacey de Luna   Jun 30, 2006


The pain races through my head
As I fall to the cold ground
I cry so much that I can't see
I feel as if I'll drown
My entire life was shattered
As you turned your back to me
I can't believe it's over
You truly made me feel free
We had such a good thing
Why must you take that away?
I loved you like no one else will
Now my soul is torn and frayed
You had a sparkle in your eyes
While we would hang around
But that day that you left
That sparkle was nowhere to be found
You were the greatest thing
That could ever happen to me
I never wanted t to end
But it wasn't meant to me
I'll never find anyone else
Who is as good to me as you
I'll always remember what we had
Even though you've made me blue

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    I love this poem and I feel the love here and the pain keep it up great job 5/5