Wow.. Just wow..

Wow, this has such a good story line. I really enjoyed reading it. Nice work.

A very sad poem, but written with talent. it is so great 5/5

Shawna, I think this poem could use a little work but overall it was pretty good.

Check your spelling -- you spelled "all right" wrong, it`s two seperate words.
The theme was kind of vague, I couldn`t tell who the subject was. There wasn`t enough detail.
You`re rhymes were kind of simple - you may want to try some more complex and unusual rhyming, as it makes it more interesting and unpredictable for the reader.

*Samantha Hollywood

Wow, very emotional poem. Perfect job

Well, that was amazing..very saad tho, but it was great..i definitely did not expect it to end up like that tho...It made a great ending!

Very blunt
Well done

I love it honey. You are awesome! And tell that girl that shes the one who needs to learn how to write.. my hell! I LOVE YOU

Such a sad story... Love the flow and pace of the poem... good write. 5/5

This was very sad, and it really brought reality into place, keep writing because i loved this poem and would love to read more
xxxxxxx

*Standing Ovation* Woot Woot! Thats What I'm Talking About, Its About Time We See a Poem About An Abused Victim That Fights Back...Its a Rare Accurance But Always Satisfiying To Read Expecially When The Authors Talanted 5/5 All The Way!
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Wow! The ending suprised me! Lol. The rhyming and flow to the poem were pretty good. It was soo sad. Excellent job!

Awesome poetry. That really made me feel for the young girl in the poem, its sad that kids have to go through abuse, and you portrayed that depth and depression excellently.

Peace. [Sole]