Aww! This was beautiful!! Such great imagry you used in this piece. I loved it. =) Keep up the great work! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

This poem is so sweet and so well written, I definately love it. I really liked the last stanza, and I also liked these lines:

Embedded on the black night sky
They are so close, and yet so far

Beautiful!

XoXo
Gaby

It was nicely written...Not exactly the best because there did have some forced rhyming in the middle but not as noticeable really. Enjoyed the imagery and just how it did flow throughout.
~Faith

I love how this poem ends.

It is worderful poem. It Love your this poem.
5/5

Naw, how sweet, I love it!

That's a lovely way of ending the whole poem.

enjoyed reading this.

good luck and peace
shobhana

As a lot of other people said, great use if imagery. This poem is so beautiful. I love it. =) 5/5 -La Little Lor Lor

I loved it.....

AHH, that's a very sweet poem. i lov the ending. u got a gr8 image:)

xox

Very good. so realistic. i can picture lying on the picnic table in my backyard doing that same thing.

Beautiful! love the metaphors!

I love to watch the stars myself, and every now and then, even make wishes on them. This poem was makes me want to run outside right now. Beautfully written. Timothy r

This poem is great. i liked it too. i just posted another one, check it out. thanks. keep up the great work.

Hey, just wanted to let you know i added u to my favorites because you got some killher poems :) keep up the good work

Ooh just workig my way throught your poems. I love this one too, its so nice and kinda gentle - made me smile. Great work.

Kelly
xx

Love it

Wow, amazing poem, I loved it