Secrets

by Aussie   Jul 1, 2006


In this basket is filled with stuff
that no one had ever seen
nor never taken out

it's prettiness guards what's in
so left alone
and not miss with

it seems that this basket
has no limit
for stuff continues be put in

each time the basket's prettiness lies
it only brings
its limits near

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  • 17 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I really like you're take on things. You have thought about it from a different angle. I like that! Great poem, very well written!

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  • 17 years ago

    by .

    Like it... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    That thought challeneged me... very interesting. To see how far you can push the limits of sercrets before all the lies are found out. Good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. i really like the way that you did this. Great job on this! Keep it up :)