Since Forever

by CourtneyLouxxx   Jul 2, 2006


"Since Forever"

A pain like no other
A love I cry
I'll try and forget
As I begin to die

I'll laeve you to ponder
The effects of my life
I"ll leave you a letter
Next to a blood stained knife

No longer a whole
As I retrace my days
A painful past
My depression phase

I thought more than anyone
People really understood
I wish you could feel this pain
I really think you should

This is what the note will read:
"I loved you till my dieing day
My heart grew much weaker
Be happy is all I can say"

As my broken heart
Rips and tears in two
As again my red blood spills
Always remember my love for you

At the bottom of the letter signed:
"My love for you will leave me never
My shattered heart holds on to you
Because I've loved you since forever"

© C.L.S

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    I read this on your bebo site its really good hunni, ur poetry has come such a long way. xox sam

  • 17 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    HOLLY FUK!!!
    This is what the note will read:
    "I loved you till my dieing day
    My heart grew much weaker
    Be happy is all I can say"

    As my broken heart
    Rips and tears in two
    As again my red blood spills
    Always remember my love for you

    At the bottom of the letter signed:
    "My love for you will leave me never
    My shattered heart holds on to you
    Because I've loved you since forever

    BEST LINES EVA!! 5/5
    i really like this poem......
    you hav showen what u really feel witout saying the words out load...
    although i can relate to it...im not in ur place to know how u really feel.... :(...great poem courtney.....
    you should be happy and smiling that you got this real great talent :)

    nami

  • 17 years ago

    by brokenxmirror92

    Great poem. 5/5. Good job making life and knife (common rhyme) an interesting duo, and not just a boring pair.

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥{x{falling hearts and falling tears}x} ♥

    Hey whats up, I dont think theres nothing wrong with this poem i think its awsome just like your other poems well talk to u later bye bye

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