Just Begun

by Tamra   Jul 2, 2006


You don't know how I feel
After every insult
You don't know how it hurts
After every time you lie
This is the result
You make me want to die
The eyes area all staring
at all of what they see
The mouths are all laughing
Laughing at me
They all point their fingers
And say I'm full of sin
But they will never know
The world I live in
My world is full of sadness
and all shattered dreams
These things that are new to them
so so that it seems
and with this line I'm closing
and with this line I'm done
but the pain an fear's not over
It has just begun

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  • 17 years ago

    by ABrookeD

    I can really relate to this poem. You really put your emotions in it and that makes it really great. Once again, this poem was great. I loved the flow nad everything.

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Sad...but unbelievably good! You loaded this pome with emotion, and the flow is superb. I have absolutley no critiques-the poem is perfect!! 5/5 Keep it up-you undoubtably have talent-

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    So so that it seems
    [I didn't quite understand that line with the two 'so']

    But, again. You really put your emotions into this. And I can relate to it alot aswell. I hope it's not true though for you. Keep up your great work, hun. 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

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