That is a very good poem. keep It up!!!!!

Really funny about the glade he doesnt get on here. but it was a good poem and i loved how it rymed so keep it up cant wait to here more.

This was a great poem....you did really good with ryhming ....................5/5

Haha poor Ross.

Oh well. Tee hee.

=)

ilu. joy.

Very nice poem. Although it was a tad short, you got straight to the point. I liked it alot. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

It was really good I really did like it! There was a lot of emotion in a very short poem! Great job 5/5

Please r/r/c rose colored glasses, love, new me, and here I am!!!

I know I added an xtra I plan to read the other poem also so just tag it on...........

Short but sweet. Do check grammar/typo stuff (mostly "i" to "I" transitions, stick to one or the other throughout, and normally always capitalized).

Awww, this is so sad and full of emotion. It is a great write! It is short, but long enough so tht you could get your emotion through---5/5

Awww, that was veryyy sad but great! It flowed perfectly, it was a bit short but still it was an awesome write!!

Lol. very very kool. i like it a lot. short and sweet. simple yet powerful. loved it all : )

I like it.. i wasnt in awe, but u wer very honest and u expressed it well.. u got ur rhythm laid out pretty well, tho ur flow wasnt all that good at places; one line wud be too short or too long for the one before it..
i dont reli understand ur first stanza, either.. it doesnt make all that sense to me :S maybe im just sleepy, but plz let me noe wat u meant..

i love ur stanza before the last.. it rocked.. i reli sensed ur strength after ur breakup.. however sad it may be

keep it up
take care
NannO

Mousie - This was great! I liked the two line stanzas, you don`t see that a lot. The rhyming and flow worked out so well. Great job, I`m off to do your other new poem =D

Samantha Hollywood

Nicely done. Your writing truly reflect the healing over time and expressed your emotions clearly. 5/5

Time has passed me by,
Now I have my wings to fly.

I liked that, I hope that you have well and truly healed. Nothing like a broken heart that still has a crack in it! The poem was short, but nice, and though it ended rather abruptly it was still a nice ending, a strong one...

//T.L.//

Haha nice way to get back...lol....no but I liked your poem it was short and sweet.

A short poem, but you got straight into it.. I liked it. Good work. 5/5

Its a good poem but i think if you added more depth into your feelings and emotions rather than concentrating on rhyming it would be better. Explain the very depths of your feelings and keep writing. 4/5

Very well written!! Love can really suck!! But it will make you stronger!! 5/5

I thought it was really good! The 1st rhyme sounded a bit... forced, but other then that I really enjoyed it, it was well writen, and had a very good flow, good job!

Very straight to the point:)...i think that you wrote this poem very well...it feels so free and deep...great Job!!