Great job. I like this. 5/5
-Kakashi

Actually.. this one's my favorite. i hadn't read it yet. you are a super-skilled poem-ninja!!

Interesting. The only thing I found a problem with was:

Your told the simple, but you just want the complex.
You hear my naught, less I speak.

Your should be You're and hear my naught i think you meant hear me naught.

Oh and I'm not sure if you did this on purpose.. but the naught you use is like naughty and the ... well ther other is not like "Get to you room!"
"I will not."
and the other is "You're very naughty." So yeah... You might have meant to do that but IDK. Great Poem Babe

5/5

Great job, this is very good dacey, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!