Crime

by Lovemelodyx3   Jul 4, 2006


Lets commit a perfect crime
Ill steal your heart
and
You steal mine

We'll run away
with all our sins
no one will know
whats gone within

Ill lay down first
and you begin the crime
but hurry hurry
we dont got much time

Now when you have it out
Hold it really tight
My heart is very gentle
and wont be taken without a fight

Now lay down quickly
its my turn to steal
i slowly cut you open
with my hands,your skin i peel

Now i have your heart
and you have mine
Now we have committed
The perfect crime

*as for the quotes "lets commit a perfect crime.ill steal your heart and you steal mine" most know that i DID NOT write that. Just a warning ^_^*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jaime

    Wow, that was a little bit morbid heh.

    "Lets commit a perfect crime
    Ill steal your heart
    and
    You steal mine"

    ^I know I've seen that quote several times before, I don't think you wrote it. You should point that out at the end at least.

    I would also suggest checking the spelling. "gentel" should be "gentle", "if" should be "is", "tooken" should be "taken". Just little stuff, I know it's a pain.

    The poem itself wasn't too bad. A little morbid like I said, but the rhyming was pretty good and it flowed nicely.

    Take care.

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