What would they say? Would they know where to start?
Would they write what was in their mind, or what was in their heart?
Would they complain about their lives? Or worse, blame God for it all?
Would they know he always caught them, Or just think he let them fall?
[Loved that stanza. wow.]

Girls, This poem was so good. Words can't even explain how this touched me. It's a very heartfelt warming poem. It nearly had me in tears.

Your flow and rhyming were fantastic. The message behind it, well, what can I say? It was great. One of the best I've read from you two I think. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Oh... My... I have never read a poem like this.... it so amazingly perfect! I could Critique it on not having enough periods and commas. But u honestly do not even miss them at all because you’re to insanely busy reading the message that is just... wonderful! I cant Critique it because I am so honestly blown away... this has to be basically my favorite poem on this site! I adore it! I am so GLAD! I clicked on that message board because I got to read this! It really hits you while you’re reading it, its just so powerful... I could just go on! Its honestly breath taking and I applaud you so highly for writing this beautifully perfect poem. I… am just so amazed. I give u a 6 lol (If that where possible!) And I truly adore this piece of art. Thank You! I think you can change many peoples lives with this poem! And I hope it does. Thank You again!

~+Megan+~

Very good. The changing of line lengths from one stanza to the other throws off the pace/flow of the poem a bit... but it's a great message and you convey it well. Great job girls.

Excellent poem, truly amazing

Beautiful poem... I'm speechless.

All I know is I'm definitely going to show this one to my youth pastor.

//Tragic\\

Beautiful , it kind of made me wonder what I would say.Your poems inspire , as Martha [Stewart] would say "thats a good thing."

Soo good!!

This is an amazing poem..it truely is

I don't believe in god but your thinking is right girls.. keep the good work