You kept to a very simple structure, and it pulled it off well, without it sounding repetitive or boring.

I'm going to be honest though, when I read it I had a horrible image left - some kind of skeletal system - but that's probably just my mind.

I do like the fact that you did strip down all the basic outer beauty to find the person inside. That was great.

Good work Brandy, I hope to read more poems like this from you. x

It seemed a little forced at the end, but it was a really good poem nonetheless. You have talent as well. =)

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Too many people look only at the outer person and miss all the important stuff! I really like this.
Im working on making mine flow better
I appreciate your input Thanks.

I loved the message you got across in this poem...great poem...perfect rythm:):)

Hello... ^_^
I really enjoyed reading this one... Very nice write.
Beautiful actually.
I really liked it... And I regret the fact that I can't tell you this without sounding like I'm trying to kiss your .... Yeah...

I thought the flow was pretty rad, and the topic was very nicely chosen. Er... Something... Anyway's.

I read some of the comments you left to other people. And I like your honesty.
I hope you'll comment my poems and tell me what you think... No matter how discouraging it may be.

Happy writing,
Hannah.

With only an outside you become bleak, I don't know how you did that but keep it up. This makes me feel great inside.

I loved this write! it was unique. and very true also. an inspirational poem indeed. a great flow and you kept it simple and got your message across perfectly. job well done. keep it up! 5/5.

-Ashlei.