Great poem. i find it really cool how the first letter spells out the title. keep it up. thx for the wonderful comment. i feel like we have lots in commun. stay strong. xoxox.

I most certainly did like it. You write really well its a strong poem

Hey great poem!, i love the way u did that letter thing!
great job love mel

Hey
It's a great piece of poetry. I liek that you don't rely on rhyme and the point is made and expressed very well. The title being spelled out is clever and the lines don't seem forced which was why i didn't notice it until it was mentioned. Well done.

Jemma

Hey, thanks for the comment. i love this poem, especially "tears flow just like rain" verrryy good. love and luck
mollyjade

Beautiful...I can relate to it so well!

Stay stong and Im here to talk whenever you need to.

~Miss Poetic~

I rele liked this!!! its emotional and i can rele relate 2 it-its weird coz i feel almost exactly like that!! keep it up hun!

lizzie
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