Comments : You Shattered

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Okay, this is just constructive criticism. But, I was not very fond of your poem.

    1.) You had many spelling errors and you didn't punctuate correctly and you typed like you were on AIM.

    2.) You changed your opinion of your guy. One minute you hate his guts, and the next you want him back and it was a see-saw effect.

    3.) You got off topic. Always stay on topic or your readers will get distracted. I've learned it from personal experience.

    Overall, I give this poem a 2 because of it's shoddy grammar and spelling errors.

    And, I still don't understand how it made it to the best love poems. No offense.

  • 17 years ago

    by superman15

    Wow, sounds like u got really hurt, but hey it also sounds like ur "x" was a dum jerkoff...
    checkout my poems and lemme know what u think.plz.

  • 17 years ago

    by Court

    Its very sad.
    But i really liked it.

  • 17 years ago

    by selina

    Omg i totally feel this way about my ex... you are amazing... keep writing and submitting please... makes me feel better i know that sounds mean but its not meant to be

  • 17 years ago

    by Cassandra Wojick

    I like it !

  • 17 years ago

    by Juanita

    This is a powerful poem. I can see where you are coming from on this as well. But do remember not all guys are dumb as*es like that. Good job on the poem though.
    ~Juanita~

  • 16 years ago

    by Cedric

    Really Nice. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Kenny

    Very nice! Love It!