[ Great flow all throughout the poem. Made it easy to read ]

Its sweet that you wrote this for your friend, sounds like you guys are really close. Thats something to hold on to and never let go =]

Juls

Awwww---this is a cute poem! Very sweet that you wrote it for your friend--It had a great flow and I love the rhyme in it. It wasnt overwhelming or forced at all! Great write 5/5

Aw that was os sweet! Ashley is definatly lucky to have a great friend like you. I loved this poem, great work, keep it up.

--Steph

Aww. This is a lovely little poem. Very touching.

"Accept that I love you
And that you`re one of a kind"

That's really adorable.

This poem is just too nice to find a complaint about. Really lovely work Samantha. x

Okay I thought that this poem was good! I really love the last stanza it is awesome. The second one though seems a little forced...Instead of must I would put in We've got a friendship I can trust" Or I dunno you do whatever. Good job though!

Kudos

-pleaser/r/c here i am, rose colored glasses, and for you!
Thanks-ann

I loved that poem... really good... and it was totally right on! It really worked and i could totally relate!! nice job

I love this poem, it is filled with so much love and care. The rhyming was really good and didn't feel forced. I love the way that you ended it. I can definitely relate to that with one of my friends. But Great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!!

Awwww... such a sweet dedication.. i loved evrything about it.. the words, the rhyme, and the flow was good..

4th stanza, last line: its too short for the rest of the stanza. i suggest u change "cant" to "cannot"..

i loved it.. its gr8.. i cud reli feel how much u loved ur friend..and to wat lengths ud go to make her happy :D

i suggest u shorten ur title a bit; its too long.. i suggest just "Till the End" coz its obvious that since ur going to last, that u actually started somewhere.. its up to u, however..

i adored the 3rd stanza.. it reli stood out..

keep up the gr8 work 5/5
take care
NannO

I this it was very cute & toching poem. It had a very good flow to it as well.

Awwwwww das so like [[me]] nd mi [[bestie]]....das gr8

L[o]Ve STaCi...oOo...xXx...

Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

Hey. We all have a great friend that means the world to us and this is a great poem to show that to your special friend. It's written really good, with a good flow all the way through. Keep up the great work.
Much love,
Tammie

Very sweet, i can tell your good friends and she means alot to you. nice flow...over all just very good

I liked the poem, but it seemed some of the lines were a bit forced. Remember, not all poems have to rhyme.

xDarksuicidex

This is sweet i wish i had a best friend i could say that to...but my best friend sucks...:(

This one is probably my favorite one I have read so far it also flowed well and had a nice topic. good job
~~Retniapdoolb

OMG Samantha!! What a beautiful poem about friendship!! I wish I could be your best friend the way you treasure your friendships with others!! Great work!

This is such a cute poem, it begins and ends really well and the message is just so simple and honest. a great write, it seems so innocent somehow, just straight and to the point with no unneccesary flounciness! i really enjoyed it :)

-biscuit-