Oh my god!..this is what im going through with my boyfriend!...i love this poem..keep writing**

Bridgette,

This was such a great poem, i loved the idea of it, it's so sad though. I really liked this stanza:

"We talk like we're just fine
Only reading between the lines
Dancing around the question
That is always on our minds"

Great work

--Steph

THis is a Great Poem
I can really feel the message.
And you worded it great.
Keep writing

Chris

Bridgette -- Great job!
The flow and rhyming was really nice. The theme seemed well thought out, and overall, it was a really great poem. =D Nice job
5/5

Samantha Hollywood

Good write. Only comment is with the last sentence of the fourth stanza... seems to have broke the flow of the poem... maybe it's just me. 5/5

Great write! I love how you started the poem with questions! It caught my attention right away---There is a lot of emotion and the flow id wonderful! 5/5 Keep it up!

The opening stanza was pretty good, having questions, it corresponded with the title of this poem really well. Then the other few stanza were like answers, really creative. Wow, interesting, I had to read it twice. That was very creative, and enjoyable to read. Keep on writing!

WOw amazing flow, and you kept the rhyme scheme nearly perfect. Just amazing, the one part I thought was just better than the rest was obviously,

"We talk like we're just fine
Only reading between the lines
Dancing around the question
That is always on our minds"

That was obviously the clearest stanza in the poem. (if that makes sense) Great poem, love ready yours.

5/5
~*`BryceDressler`*~

Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

This is a very well written peice, the questions at the begining really pull the reader in and the clarity of the content there on holds them through tot the end

Bridgette---Your poem is wonderful. I'm going through the same thing with my boyfriend now. I have some poems (I loved you..., and This is what happens) Please read and comment. Keep up the good Work!!!

Danielle

I like it! good job!

Awwwwww, thats a great poem, i love it, im putting you on my favorites hoping to hear more from you,
this poem definately earned my 5, and right now im going to check out some more of your poems, keep up the good work and keep in touch, if you ever get the time, check out some of my "work"
till then peace out. good work

Excellent beginning. The ending was kind of so-so because it's like many lost love lines.

Aw wow. That's so sad. It was great though. I really liked it. I can't explain why though. It was just really original and shtuf, tehe. Awesome job! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow. That's all I can say lol. It makes me feel so...depressed lol. Ah well...I'm used to being depressed, so no worries. I hope everything works out! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha