I really liked this, but i wasn't really sure what it was about. But that doesnt really matter, cause it flowed really well and the rhymes were perfect I loved this line "I was ashamed, but you weren't judging me,"

Great work

--Steph

Strong Metaphors, Beautifuly Written And Formated...5.0 All The Way
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo
By The Way I Loved The First Stanza!

Wow, I think this poem is really deep, I like it a lot... It's hard to me sometimes to write my feelings but you did it very well...
Great job =D

Wow. Such a sad poem. Very well written though. The emotions were conveyed so well. You also used excellent choice of wording. It was amazing. Keep it up, and thank you for your kind words on my poem. =) 5/5

Natalie``

Very excellent poem. Strong and deliberate and a -wonderful- topic. Very orginal. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Awww.. keep your chin up hun.. this was so sadd.. the emotion was clear and strong.. it flowed pretty well and i like the idea of colour representing your mood..

I guess it's not bright, since it's sorrow what I feel.
^ should be "that" not "what"

nice job! 5/5

This is a really good poem..i like how u used ur words. they explain everything excellent job i love it

Wonderful. I like it, very creative, and the word strutore was amazing, can't help but want to read it again and again.

Wow this one is another one of your great poems!

'I asked: "What color do you see within this heart?", I guess it's not bright, since it's sorrow what I feel. Maybe a combination of tears streaming in the dark, a dark blue soul is what your eyes may see.'

I loved that paragraph or stanza....5/5

Wow, this poem is so beautifully written! Every stanza has great flow and wording, ant the whole piece is flawless. I admire your writing skills!
5/5 from me.
The firs stanza is my favorite.