End is near [p-1]

by Chris   Jul 12, 2006


I'm making sure that the stars fall into place
And all the clouds move quietly across the sky
So when the rain drops we can feel his grace
As the storm picks up and the wind passes by
The leaves fall namelessly without a sound
As all the trees tremble with fear
The earth shakes while his wrath splits the ground
This is the beginning of the thought that the end is near..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Wicked! I was curious to what [p-1] meant.

    Another question, you really love the stars. You write about it so often. I think you can write a really good 'nature' poem just about the stars. It would be a joy to read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Thats kinda sad. Reminds me of a nightmare I just had. Yeah. It was scary lol.

    I thought it was pretty short and you could have added a little more detail to it, but I'm guessing you're gonna make a part two to it? anyways, at the start, in the second and third line, you said "And" at the beginning of both of them. Maybe you could think of something else to replace one of those cause to me it kinda threw it off. It was a great poem though. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

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