You Must Die

Right.. I got told to write a song for my Friend's new band, and here it is. Please comment and rate it, I need to know If I gotta go back to the drawing board (",)

Bleed for me,
Bleed for me.
(I'd do the same for you.)

Die for me,
Die for me.
(I'm about to do the same)
.
When you look in the mirror,
Are you scared?
Knowing the bullet in my head
Was the doing of this pretty little princess.

(You must die)
For me to be happy
(You must die)
For me to be at peace
(You must die)
For me to live
(You must die)
Die for me, please...