The Devil

by Arcane Blondie   Jul 13, 2006


Pitch-black night sky,
Eerie wind swaying the trees,
Glowing moon eliminates the silver,
Freshly polished for its duty,

She continues her walk through the woods,
The treetops watch her every move,
The leaves fall from the persistent wind,
And are crushed under her weight,

Creatures of the night run from her path,
Nothing can stop her,
She has that sinister look in her eyes,
Her body is possessed and walks its path,
With the knife in hand,

No living soul is around to meet death,
Her feet steadily hit the ground,
Not pausing for a single startling sound,

She reaches a spot deep in the woods,
Where the trees are cleared,
And the moon lightens a meadow of tall grass,

She waits for something unknown,
The knife slips from her hand,
Into the grasp of a killer,
On that spot of grass she is slaughtered,
Just like every other night she dies,
Dies the same death,
Exactly identical to the night before,
And continually she goes to Hell,

Every night she meets her doom,
But is for once happy to she the sight of her master,
The Devil himself,
His evil overwhelming the world,
And the beloved hero to so many,
And day after day she lives again,
Even though the Devil got his wish,
To kill the Devil herself---

*Wow-I dont even understand this poem myself...I just sat down and started writing what was on my mind and how I was feeling at the time. I posted this just to see what other people think---I might not keep it posted but I thought I`d see what the reaction will be because I dont know what I think of it*

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Wow.. I understood this but god I didn't.. By the end I was ready to lift pages and start looking for the rest of it, you know what I mean? GOD I loved this.. You're going on my favorites list. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 10.5 (If only it were possible!)

  • 17 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    Extremely vibrant and extrodinary images. The word 'wonderful' should cover it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, you have managed to grasp an ability not many people are good at. Description and images. You use the right words to create such a clear image. Your dark poetry is amazing, and you have a gift to bring out such morbid and graphic images yet you have a humble heart. Talent is what you have.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Definatly keep it posted. It is really good. It was slightly confusing to me at first but I reread it and I understand it now. It was kind of scary but more sad than it was scary. It is a very dark poem but I like it.

    5/5

    >black&&blue

  • I like it, it was interseting!! I have never read a poem like it!!! The descriptions were great!!!! I was confused by the end but other then that 5/5!! Great Job!!