To my best friend

by Lonley prince   Jul 13, 2006


As you lay in my bed
your form so true
me eyes last drop bled
if only you knew

each seconds so fast
each moments so slow
i wish it could last
but time seems to go

your words are like fire
your words hurt me so
i call you a liar
yet i cant let you go

u keep sayin its alright
but you get up to leave
im holding so tight
my hands on ur sleeve

you tell me its fine
and walk toward the door
but your lies i decline
and my shouts u ignore

u cheated on me
but i cant let u go
every thing i see
and everything i know

it all tells me to stay
but this time i dont
you tell me you\'ll pay
but this time you wont

you cry your goodbye
i yell this is the end
all cuz of a guy
who i thought was my friend...

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  • 17 years ago

    by SweetxMisery

    Aww you wrote this really well.
    You expressed the hurt you feel well when a friend turns their back on you.

    Nice work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    This is a different turn. Usually it's told in the girl's perspective. Nice to see another view on this type of idea. There's some problems with it like the words chosen. They're not exactly as strong for this. At times it didn't flow as smoothly. The potential's there.
    ~Faith-less