Washing Away

by Jacklyn   Jul 16, 2006


Grabbing a hold of a peaceful breeze
breathing in deeply, smelling the sea
closing my eyes relaxing all thoughts
Temporary lost, tangled within love

Laying naked upon the sandy sea shore
allowing the waves to crash upon my soul
Washing away my past broken hopes
casting my heart to his caring arms

Exposing my eyes to anew horizon skies
viewing a sunset, allowing nothing to hide
Revealing emotions locked away long ago
as we lay there together, becoming just one

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kara !

    "Exposing my eyes to anew horizon skies"

    That's a little confusing. I get what you are saying, but it took my mind a couple of rereads to process it.

    But a great write overall Jacklyn. I love the way you've described the set, which what looks like such ease. And there isn't a single fault in the flow. I love the beautiful imagery, and how the whole piece felt so heart-felt. Great work. x

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