It makes tons of sense, this is a very BEAUTIFUL poem...very touching wow the beat is so amamzing keep it up such a wonderful writer one of my favorites on this site

Another very good poem... 5/5

Ooh. this was intruging. i wouldnt change it in anyway. each and every one of your poems are writen really well. i can feel the emotion, and thats what makes a good poem a great one.
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

I think this made perfect sense. I have absolutely nothing to critisize in this at all; your wording was perfect, as was the flow. The structure was different, but not bad in any way, shape or form.

"Crystal tear drops are burning
Wilted petals where I stand"

^ Beautiful imagery created here.

Beautiful...very much so! I love it...All of your writing has so much meaning to it!

Beautifully written and such vivid images, your ability to express yourself is amazing. i don't understand this poem, but i like that, i like the ambiguity to it. it is so well worded and just wonderful in every sense.

I love the way this poem goes together.. You did a great job5/5

I loved the imagery in this and the rhyming was very good aswell, usually i don't like rhyme but in this case you have incorporated it flawlessly and it really gives the piece a nice rhythm which carries through to the end despite the break in rhyme there. In fact my favourite stanza was the last one because it was different. An interesting write, i enjoyed it :)

Wow this was amazing.. definatly worth the brag. I liked how you made it so beautiful and creative. Amazing idea. "Crystal tear drops are burning" this was my favorite line.. very very powerful and full of inspiration. Well done.

It was a short poem but in these whort lines you have expressed thosands of things. and this is an art. and i can feel that you are a grat writer. i loved you all poem and wait for see any new poem take care 5/5

As you stated beauty is in the eye of the beholder and that very much relates to your poem. One can only draw from it through the experiences that they've had. All in all great poem!