Dont Forget Me

by justinisalive   Jul 17, 2006


I never gave her the chance,
but i loved her at first glance.
she says i saved her from who she was becoming,
i wanted her to know i was scared and running.
i was there when no one else wasn't,
i would give up I'm so reluctant.
now I'm trying everything to make her stay,
but she want change her mind, and shes going away.
So Don't forget me when Ur sad,
cause ill will still be there, Good time or bad.

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  • 19 years ago

    by suchaprettyface

    There are a few errors sorry.

  • 19 years ago

    by suchaprettyface

    I like your poem keep writing and express from deep within.

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Spelling errors but overall this was nice. Some flow probs in this piece but really had some interesting thoughts that were given. Some cool words but not overbearing or too "complex" and easily distracting. Plain, straight up, nice. So there's some talent presented because it was pretty good though short. Not bad, not bad at all just not mind blowing.
    ~Faith-less

  • 19 years ago

    by justinisalive

    Yeah thats my poem right there

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