Me
by ~lynn~ Jul 18, 2006
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Sometimes i wonder if you really see me.i know when u see me I'm smiling an happy,but if you took a second to look in my eyes you would see the real me.the real me isn't smiling the real me isn't happy.the real me isn't a clown that wants to make everyone happy.The real me is sad.the real me just wants to be set free an to have a chance to be happy.so can you please tell me do any of you see me. |
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17 years ago
by *Charisma*
Good job. thanks for the comment. umm one suggestion...can you possible put it in like stanzas...you know like seperate sentences. it will flow better :) good job again!
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17 years ago
Wonderful little truths of ones soul! I loved it! keep working!
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17 years ago
by kia
Short and to the point. It had a nice flow very nicely written. I related to it a lot. 5\5 take care. Love you to comment on any of mine.
