Falling To Pieces

by Arcane Blondie   Jul 19, 2006


My life is falling to pieces,
Right in front of my eyes,
Everything is heading downhill,
Every time I tell my lies,

I don`t know how to deal,
I`m just going with the flow,
But I can`t hold on much longer,
Whether I can last-I do not know,

I keep my feelings hidden inside,
But deep down I want to share,
It`s hard finding some one willing to listen,
Someone that will genuinely care,

I search for happiness every day,
Wishing I could find some lost hope,
Even if life gets a little better,
I still can`t seem to cope.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gabi

    I know exactly what you're saying. It's like your poem is about me in a way. Every day I feel worse and like my whole world is crashing down. You're an amazing person and I do genuinely care. I'm always here for and you can talk to me anytime, day or night. Stay strong!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    5/5. I can relate a lot to this poem. It's so true for many people, even the people we all think that are truly happy... We're never the same people on the inside as we are on the outside... Anyway, very good. Very descriptive. My favorite stanza was:

    "My life is falling to pieces,
    Right in front of my eyes,
    Everything is heading downhill,
    Every time I tell my lies,"

    It was a very good beginning. Keep writing!!

    ~BJ~

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet MeMoRiEs

    Thankks for the comment/votee.. i completely understanddd//relate to this poem. and if u ever need someone to listen im here for you

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Aw, hey, you can always come to me if you seriously need someone. I may be a stranger, but I promise I"ll be nice.

    Now, I really liked this poem because you seem to write on the same topics I do and so I can relate really well.. I'm not sure what to say about this poem though..

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by _Xx unique girl xX_

    Hey this is really good, perfect choice of words hunni _xX...Xx_

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