It had a nice flow very nice. I related to it a lot. This poem was worded perfectly. 5\5 take care. Love you to comment on any of mine.

Omg this is the very best poem I have read all day and trust me i have been reading a lot of them. This touched my heart, awesome poem plz do continue and write on.

Tony :) plz if you have time, comment on some of my, though they arn't as good as yours, all my feelings and emotions are in them.

This poem ran so smoothly, michelle it was GREAT. and i was touched by it 5/5 thanks for putting a great poem like this up.

Again! I am extremely impressed...

I really liked this poem. Good job, keep it up

I love this poem.. i can relate to it, and its just amazing. extremely nice write..keep it up 5/5