Photograph

by JP   Jul 19, 2006


Your feet are propped out the car window
we are flying down Mt. Lemmon
a wet red watered weathered landscape streaks by,
framed by the window and seen receding
in the passenger side mirror

your feet are wet from the summer rain
your first taste of the monsoon

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  • 19 years ago

    by put the [boom boom] into my heart

    Hmm its really interesting, some of the lines are great, i liked it but i want more...more background? who's in the car? where are they? what else is going on in their heads? i just want more and i htink if you elaborate youll have a stellar peice. nice work overall though! xo