by ur play toy Jul 20, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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As i close my eyes and fall asleep i dream of how you made me and mum weep i rember the day when you fell to the floor and the wisper of help as you lay like you never did befor as we pick you up and lay you in you bedand with the breath you take you say goodbye with you deep blue eyes s you drift off to a better place i will never forget you dad |
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Great poem lots of emotion but very sad...i hope you keep writing!! and maybe do some happier ones lol |
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Whoa...wow im really sorry..i know whut its like to lose some one you love...my boyfriend for 3 years died in a motocycle crash last week and one of my bestfriends was in tha crash too..she also passed away |