Star

by Rhyme of rhythm   Jul 21, 2006


Maybe I'm a small star in the sky
That shines only at night
And I know you cant see me in daylight
I'm hiding behind the clouds

Or maybe you cant see me because of your sun
Who shines brighter than I
The sun, the clouds and your friends are only one
They are too big if you compare to a little star

You and I were too different from everyone
You always hurt me every time I saw you cry
When tears fall you just look up to the clouds
You never think that I'm always behind

If you have a hard times just look up high
Wish to me to your little star
Because for you I can leave the sky
Hope you know your the heaven of mine

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  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    GENE!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is kinda really sad!im sry u have 2 feel like that! bout ur forbidden still? well in any case! i love u gene!hehe i wish 2 no star i wish 2 mii angel!k and u can always talk 2 me!

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Even the smallest light shines in the dark.

    Have faith and continue to hope...

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Uh huh. So you're a little star... for real...? Wow. That's just -- silly. Y_Y

    (^^,) Okay, I'm kidding! It's a cute love poem. You've, yet again, never failed to express your feelings into tangible words quite articulately. I quite liked it, m'dear. Quite poignant. So, cheers. :)

    Debbers xox

  • 16 years ago

    by audrey harris

    Wow, great poem! your true feelings and a good choice of words put together to make an awesome piece... very nice! write some more! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    This is agreat poem, would like to see more, search the heart they are there somewhere! would like to see what you think of mine.

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