Taking It All

by RaiScar*   Jul 21, 2006


I take with me my innocence,
I'm taking it all away.
No possessions I shall take,
Cause it all seems gay.

I take with me my reputation,
For being quite bad.
Cause I will piss people off,
And they will get mad.

I take with me my heart and soul,
So i can love again.
I'm going to take my life away,
When I count to ten.

I take with me my evil self,
I'll make up some good schemes.
So now as I end my life,
I won't scream from these dreams.

I take with me the pain I bear,
I've had for all these years.
Now as I kill myself,
Will take away all these years.

My breaths are getting shorter,
The days are getting longer.
I am getting weaker,
This pain is getting stronger.

The love I cannot share,
I take it all away.
I hate to hurt everyone,
But I cannot stay.

I will not smell the roses,
They place upon my grave.
I'll rot for eternity in hell,
Acting as a slave.

I will not experience,
Anymore spring, summer or fall.
I'm taking it all away,
Yes, I'm taking it all.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Xox P.a.U.L.i.n.A xoX

    REALLY GOOD POem... depressing as it is... Dont take it all away... 5/5
    Im always here ok>??? I know Ya'll are sick and tired of people saying I KNOW what ur going through Bu I DO KNOW... coz I AM going through so much... much more than we all can handle... just liike u... kKKK??? keep ya head up :)
    Paulina ♥

  • 17 years ago

    by *[C]ryingx[A]lone*

    Wow that was really good. i liked it a lot!!

  • 17 years ago

    by hayley

    I like it a lot. but in the first verse, saying that it all seems gay...its very discriminating towards me.im a bi girl and i find that rude.
    anyways, besides that...its awesome!

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