Comments : Falls {Haiku}

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A lot of imagery in this Haiku

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Nicely done. Welcome to the sight if you're new. =) I've become more liking of the Japanese Haiku's, and this is really good example. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Very good, I loved it! You have a great talent and this Haiku has a lot of imagery, which is hard to get with such a short poem. But you did it so well :) Good job :) 5/5!

    ~BJ~

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Contagious.
    It makes me feel like running through leaves and being a kid.
    5/5
    ~Emah

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Beautiful.
    Breathtaking.
    Perfection.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Welshy

    Very short lol...
    I was expecting more, but i guess that would contradict the Haiku style...
    Its a perfect example and great work :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Haiku, if done well, can say so much in so little words. You did a great job with this one. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, it is short but so cute,
    great job like alwayssssss

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Sweet poem, I lived in Japan for 3 years, this is very short but an awesome poem, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Oscar

    Hey, welcome to the site if your new here. this haiku was really good, and i usually don't like haikus. it flowed well and somehow it just stayed with me and i felt it's meaning.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I wrote my first Haiku today, and i thought it was good.
    This one is very very good, my friend. I think Haiku's are really powerful, keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by sibyllene

    This is so pretty. i love haiku. oh, i have a question - do you mean peeks or peaks? i guess either could work, in its own way. anyway, i really liked it