Actually, I edited that a long time ago.It is in stanzas.

Pretty good.. 5/5

Nicley written

"as I closed my eyes to sleep
to that steady beating sound
I wondered if the sun was shining
on some distant other ground
"
simply amazing the way you write...

Beautiful and rhythmic....

If the lonely heart was searching
for the kindred spirit find
If that soul across the oceans
let nature speak upon the mind

^ beautiful in the concept of kindred spirits.....
All the best, Debbie

Great poem.
Really like the word choice.
Enjoyed reading it.
Take care

Wow. this is pretty. =] the title itself caught me, and this poem made it perfect. =]

thanks for the comment.

This poem is amazing, I think the way you wrote it was brilliant and I award you 5/5, no doubt. Keep up the good work.

The title of this poem captured my attention - I am sincerely glad i read it. As I read, I could find no flaw within the poem. It was beautifully written, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

The way u put the words lets me imagine my self doing everything the poem says its crazy cuz ive never felt that way to a poem b4

Lol well iv done that afew times in the past so i might hav been that some1 out ther. but this was an inspirational poem, your words really allow the reader to delve into your world, the flow was a little broken at times but made fora pleasant read.

Eoe...truly created truly strong too...love it...

I like this one