Beauty

by Tina Carr AKA Snickers   Jul 22, 2006


I look at you
And angels sing
They sing of your beauty
And the joy that you bring

And I harmonize
With the voices and harps
Hoping you'll notice me
So I sing out my heart

We sing or your beautiful smile
And how beautiful you make others feel
Of course, I will sing every detail
Of how your beauty is real

I love you with all my heart
And I'll do all I can to prove it
I don't know what I would do without you
Without tour beauty, I would lose it

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats soo good!

    "I look at you
    And angels sing"

    I loved that stanza alot :)
    Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by ~TornBecauseOfYou~

    Wow, you got some love mm,
    ima start commentin your poems on this account, so i can boost up My Comment award, since i already have gold for the other..
    Nice poem
    Good Rhyme
    Nice message
    try and put a lil more detail into it
    capture the readers mind
    make them read the whole thing
    and leave em stunned
    well good job
    5/5
    ~MF~

  • 17 years ago

    by Trish

    I really like this poem. I mean you really describe in detail that you can't live without this guy. Keep up the good work and I hope to read many more poems from you down the road.

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